what do you think about my poem

[forgive and forget]

what did go wrong
i wanna know whats going on
where did the pain come from
because of it i want to run
even if i made it dissapear
i know that it will apear
i hear the pain telling me hush
you know thta i am not in a rush
you can cry every night and day
but know that i will never go away

[rajae13]

really i like your poem my brother honsome but teel me are u suffering or something else because you speak about pain so teel me brother and thank you for your poem and i wish to u the best luck

my best regards